At 05:21 PM 6/22/00 -0700, you wrote:
Willy: Unless their scottishi, than they wear fully blown Evening gowns into
battle with sequins!!
Konatsu: Will, fur God's sake, woman! GREASE ME UP!
Ukyou: ... Okey Dokey.
One quick call to the labor board later.....
Labour Board: Sorry, we don't have any plans for transvestites.
Ukyou: He was raised as a girl!
Labour Board: Fine, we don't have any plans for men raised as women.
The theme to the crying game starts to play in the background....
As Jim Carrey and that Irish guy take turns barfing in the toilet. :P
I dunno if that's completely true since I've heard of weirder Japanese
establishments thriving. If the truth came out Ucchans might attract a whole
new brand cliental...^^
Soap Land? ^_^
(I know, minor nit-pick...me bad...me bad...)
No biscuit for Miwa. Multi-chan will punish you. ^_^
Konatsu: The life of a konatsu is filled with peril indeed...
Ukyou: Here ya go! *Hands Konatsu a Pearl Necklace*
Konatsu: Peril! I said Peril-- Ooh, is that a Kiyoni Kawabura original?!
Man: not another one of those Bishonen types...Mou....
Larry: Hey, Do you suppose--
Curly: Nyuk nyuk nyuk.
Mou: A Wiseguy eh? *Bam*
^_^
P-chan: BWEEE~!
Obviously he's not there.... or _IS_ he? I wonder if Ukyou butchers her own
meat. :P
Don't think you have to break this into two seperate paragraphs.
One should be able to get the job done (Then again my grammar is
suspect so take that with a grain of salt).
Actually, I think you're right. Same person talking, therefore should be in
the same paragraph. But knowing you, I might be better off with the whole
shaker. ^_^ j/k.
*snip*
Rock! I win!
Heh heh...Like these couple of a paragraphs. Sets up the main theme nicely
and is also really fun to read. ^^
Nah, you just like the idea of Konatsu playing Mind Games. ^_^
Konatsu: Maybe if I showed them my Multi boxers...
That's another thing I'm not clear on. It's been a while since I read the
Konatsu translations... _DOES_ he wear boxers?
Ukyou: Well we can always get you an 'I am a man' T-shirt!!
Konatsu: Ooh! Can I have one of those 'Boy' Swimsuits that Sir Ranma wears?!
Ukyou: Err...
Man: I don't want to know, I don't want to know.....
Man: Wouldja like to go out some time?
Konatsu: I Told you I was straight!
Man: I _KNOW_! So am I!
Konatsu: Then why are you asking me out?!
Man: Because... ARGH!
Konatsu: Miss Ukyou, clean up on table seven.
Ukyou: Okay, how about a Kilt?
Konatsu: Aye, lassie. Da kilt is what I be warrin'. Cannae ye see thet?
Ukyou: What?
Konatsu: *cough* Sorry, Scottish flu.
Should change the period after 'a bit' to a comma, since the Ukyou blushed a
bit is the start of a new sentance.
So noted.
Konatsu: In this district?!?It should be frighteingly easy for me to find a
girl friend dressed like this!!
True, however, we only see the weird people in the manga pop up. Don't know
if there are any more, or any less. But weird folks seem to come from all
over in the Ranmaverse. China, Japan. I'd hate to see what us Canadians are
like.
Konatsu: What about the scots?
...
(Gets wapped for a bad running joke...)
Multi: Miwa no baka! *whaps with her mop*
Ruri: Ba~ka.
Miki: BAKA~!
Don't need the comma after No...(I think)
Probably not. It was the way I was envisioning the sentence in my head. :P
Ukyou: In fact I'd like you to try on these new bunny outfit's I just got
in.
Tom Green: I'm a Bunny! *hops* I'm a Bunny! *hops*
News Anchor 1: Am I the only one who finds this even mildly amusing?
News Anchor 2: I thought it was funny for the first fifteen minutes...
*chuckle*
And then they take a brief trip to Nanaimo. :P
Ukyou: And it means I can get rid of my hand me downs easily!!
And she does, too!
Ukyou: I wonder if I can pick up an ideal-man model at a hobby store...
It's... the IDEAL MAN! Life-Sized! Anatomically correct! Howard Stern
Endorsed!... Eww...
Ukyou: Now we just need to work out the payment scheme...
Konatsu: Well... I've got a few yen in my pocket here--
Ukyou: Not enough. Come on. I'm getting you signed up at the strip joint.
Konatsu: I'll have to show my knees and elbows?
Good prolouge and sets up things nicely in a nice comic tone. ^^
Though I wonder why Konatsu didn't bring up Ukyou's dressing habits (She
dresses like a man, thus reinforces the unisex concept). Wonder if Konatsu
might be able to teach Ukyou some dressing tips....^^
Well, Konatsu still isn't clear on the whole idea that men... usually don't
wear dresses or skirts. Therefore, he doesn't think twice when women walk
around wearing pants.
Anyway, thanks for the C&C, bud. Ttyl!
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