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Shuma in 2000. Don't settle for the lesser evil.
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From: "Lord Archive" <archive@mich.com>
To: "FFML" <ffml@fanfic.com>
Sent: Tuesday, June 13, 2000 4:17 PM
Subject: [FFML] [Fanfic][Ranma] Second Chances - Chapter 18
"Because you're sabotaging yourself for one thing. There is no such
thing as a perfect moment outside of a romance novel. Besides, a girl's
first true kiss is usually perfect _because_ it {was their : is her}
first. It's
only imperfect when it's taken by someone she didn't want to take it."
"Oh, no," Akane muttered as Ranma picked her up, his hand holding her up
by her {ass : bottom} like she was a food delivery box, and carried her
onto the
ice.
Akane scowled. Ranma was skating into a trap that Nabiki had warned him
about from the information that she 'collected.' They were up against
the Couple {Clever : Cleaver}.
I don't think I've seen the Golden Pair called smart before.
Akane contorted her body, and was now in a flying kick. If either Ranma
or her made a mistake or if the Golden {Pair : Pair's} aim was perfect,
they would
hurt each other a lot.
I mean, where did the scene with Nabiki and Ryoga come from? Don't ask
me. It just happened. I didn't plan on it and until I wrote it, I didn't
even consider it. I'm blaming it on an odd comment from Michael Chase.
Besides, the Lost Boy could use a reason to show up at the Tendos. Now
this leaves me with the question: does Nabiki want him? I don't know
yet.
She liked his food at least. That's something to start with.