In a message dated 4/18/00 5:27:48 PM, cricharddavies@hotmail.com writes:
Washuu grinned. "That is a secret, as your father always used to say to
say to me when I asked him if it'd been good for him."
Does this mean that Ryoko's father is. . .
::Gets that light in his eyes that signals a new fanfic idea::
::Feel free to scream in horror::
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Washuu couldn't sleep. Of course, she didn't need to sleep. So instead
she set up a small nanofactory dedicated to producing sex-toys for the orgy
she'd choreographed in her mind, and watched and cackled as they piled up.
After all, she was the greatest genius in the galaxy, and the Universal
Kama Sutra was merely the introduction to *her* sexual experience ...
For some reason, I found this part hilarious. I don't know why
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Tenchi slept. He'd had a long day.
If he'd known that tomorrow would be even worse, he wouldn't have slept
more soundly. He'd have left the country.
That seems about right for Tenchi. Course, if he was smart, he would have
done that a long time ago.
Lesse... Was there anything else?
Ah yes,
The Ryoko/Ayeka pairing brings to mind the relationship between Catwoman and
Batman. That is, they're heavily attracted to each other, but can't quite
follow through. So what you have is a lot of heavy sexual tension that you
can cut with a knife. If it were me, that's how I would play it. However,
that's a matter of style so I'm just going to file it under "technical
quibble" and let it go at that.
As for Sasami/Tsunami. From what you say, they'll be two minds in one body. I
disagree with this. What I see is more that they become one person. One mind,
one body. In a sense, much like Linda Danvers/Supergirl in the comic. Only
without the whole Earth Angel thing.
Other then that, it looks good. I eagerly await Tenchi's reaction when he
finds out.
--Komodo