At 02:56 AM 3/26/00 -0600, C. Jones wrote:
ARRRHRHRHHAHAHAHAHAHRHRHRHRHRHRHRRHRHGHGHGHGHGHGHGHGHG!!!!!!!!!
Damnit, Krista! AAAAAAHAAHAHHHHHHHHHHH!
Okay. Now that I've got that out of my system....
C&C...
While the pacing for the scenes between Ranma and Akane were just right, I
still feel like the Nabiki-Kunou scenes move a little slowly. While the
content is good, I feel that you could trim a few lines here or there to
speed along the general progression of the story.
I've got to disagree here; I adore the scenes wandering in the forest, they
have an incredibly vivid eerieness to them.
Waiting for 23 with a stop-watch.
This, though, I agree with. ^_^
Can't think of much else to comment on, as usual.
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