Subject: [FFML] Re: [Ranma][Shortfic][Mild Lime Flavoring] Midnight Encounter
From: David Johnston
Date: 1/31/2000, 10:55 AM
To: "C. Jones" <guilty@furinkan.net>
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

C. Jones wrote:

At 01:11 PM 1/30/00 -0500, you wrote:

"I love you, Happosai," she said.

"I love you, Kasumi-chan," he replied.


Urrr...

Jack, Jack, Jack... I like your stuff. Really, I do. Some of the stuff you
(and Lady Tesser) write just makes me wonder, though...

What was the point behind this? I mean... romantically match any two given
characters. Okay I can see that. Break them completely out of character to
do so? It might as well have been Nodoka and P-Chan or Hiroshi and Shampoo.
Seriously.

This is negative C&C, but try not to take it as a pointless flame. In the
dialogue, there was absolutely nothing to support that the two characters
were, in fact, Kasumi and Happi. 

She sighed. "When I first met you, I was repulsed. As I got to know you, 
I saw every possible bad trait; crudeness, vulgarity ..."

And you know Kasumi did say that she liked older men.




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