Im serious, this is the sickest piece of SHIT I have ever seen! What the
hell
is wrong with this guy?! Kitty with a Prozac addiction?
I have to say, I was not impressed with the writing skills, nor the story of
this fanfic. In fact I was quite dissapointed, but I do like the idea. I
(strangley enough) agree with Captain whatever his name is, they put
something in her water. Maybe someone else could actually turn the idea into
humurous fic.
As for Captain Zero, maybe I'm the only one on the ffml but a line like
" Tell me how much you loved my wonderful story!
-<(o)>- thac0ac@hotmail.com -<(o)>- "
kinda rubs me the wrong way. Better luck next time methinks.