What can  I say except that this is simply one of the most beautiful short
stories I have written.  It would be a wonderful piece to incorportate into
a "Change in Scene".  Maybe you could make a chapter dealing with Akane
finding her mothers diary.  It would help explain why Soun had such strong
faith that the two would eventually be happy together.


Brad.....the old grumpy bear.



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