-End.
Well, ladies and gentlemen, this definitely is not my first fanfic, but
it is the very FIRST one that I have completed from start to finish,
and in remarkable time as well. Maybe it's because it's smaller
than my usual novel sized ones... oh well. In either case, send me
feedback. I'd be nice to know if people actually -read- my
work... :)
Interesting and well thought out. The only problem I have is a minor
one. I just think it would have taken him one or two more visits before
hitting the level of openenss he shows at the end. But that is just me.
I wrote this fic to tie in with another fic which I plan on doing
later. In that fic, a few scientists catch wind of Ranma's curse
and... well, you can pretty much guess the rest. In either case,
through their bumbling they accidentally make Ranma's curse
incurable (he can change forms with hot/cold water like always,
but the curse can't ever be lifted), among many other things. This
fic theoretically takes place -after- that one. I'll get started on it
later.
I've yet to see any fics that try to psychoanalyze Ranma as to
how his curse in general has affected him, and that surprises me.
I've never seen a fic like that, but I ran across a webpage a while
back which analyzed Ranma and the Tendo girls, the later concentrating on
how the death of their mother could explain a lot about them.
While I'm not a psych major, the reasoning you showed in this does seem
to work.
Donovan Willett
[Now that I've been reminded, I'm gonna see if I can find that page.]