Subject: [FFML] Re: [C&C] Serenity Moon part 1
From: "Beky neRichnead" <bekyx@hotmail.com>
Date: 11/30/1999, 7:55 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

While I thought this fic was something of a rehash... I wasn't
thinking the original. It reminded me more of a way put off
Sailor Moon R. I actually kinda enjoyed it. The development
of the adult former senshi was cool, and I could definetely
see Minako and Makoto going off and fighting without their
powers.

I really enjoyed the origins of Mikado... though his last
name was too close to Sanzenin for comfort. Is Yukiko going
to be Saturn?

The last scene w/ Jade and Metallia was beautiful. And
I'll pay to watch Beryl burn. *G*

More characterization can probably be achieved by bringing
in Akiko earlier - she seems to have the most problems.

Anyway, I did find myself enjoying this, so I hope after
a revision of the first chapter, you grace us with
another one.

           Beky NeRichnead
High Priestess of the Social Order of the Sacred Safety Pin

There are three types of particles in the universe: a few
protons, a few electrons, and a whole lot of morons.

I'm out of my right now, but if I get back before I return, please tell me to wait.

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