On 30 Nov 1999 earthbind@usa.net wrote:
Ranma and Ataru were still sound asleep. Even though it
was their day off, they still would've been up by now. This
was easily explained: Ranma had a run-in and marathon battle
with Ryouga, while Ataru stayed out until late chasing
women.
This was not normal.
(I though it was. That, and the fact Ranma ends up in a marathon of many
martial artists :)
Whoop, will have to rework the phrase to make it clear those two
sleeping so late wasn't normal....
Ranma, while not happy, was somewhat used to this sort of
thing. At worst, he displayed a little irritation and
occasional harsh glares at Washu.
He didn't need to yell.
(where did the kettle come from?)
The same place where mallets come from ;)
Once more inside the Masaki household, the pirate and
the princess sulked on the sofa. Their long-awaited stress
relief interrupted, they found themselves suddenly not in
the mood anymore. Around them, Washu checked on Ataru,
while Ranma just sat quietly.
(shouldn't he be looking around in case Ryo-oh-oki returns)
Oh. Damn. I never did have Ryo-oh-ki meet Ranma.
Argh.... time to go back and rework.
//Funny you should mention the house,// said Washu, a
slightly nervous grin on her face. //I was tinkering with
an old time/space warp engine and, aheh, well, things
happened.//
(unless she was doing this on the kitchen table the house shouldn't have
vanished, since the lab is in another dimension and all)
It's Washu. Weird Shit Happens.
If I need to be specific, I can always say the door
to the house was ajar. SHould I? Just wondering.
(I first read this story around summer so I didn't wait as long. It was worth
it though, loved the chapter. I'm new to responding so please ignore me if
you find it not up to your standard. Just thought you like to hear my
thoughts.)
Sure, go ahead.
-Rod M