I admit it; I have been delinquent in my
responsibilities.
But what can one say? This fic is, like it's parent,
excellent. Unlike many continuing fics, there is no
sense of meandering, that the author has no idea is
coming next; instead, one gains the impression that
the author knows the story and the only reason we're
not being told in one great lump is that he doesn't
want to get RSI. The plot is tight and concise;
pairings are believable and strong; the action neither
drags nor is too quick to follow. I urge everyone to
read these two stories, and I have only one wish to
make.
I WISH THAT I COULD WRITE LIKE THIS!!!
Raye
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perhaps your brain has been washed.
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