Subject: [FFML] Re: [fanfic][TM!] Vacation Days Chapter 4
From: Miashara
Date: 11/5/1999, 4:12 PM
To: DB Sommer <sommer@3rdm.net>, FFML <ffml@fanfic.com>

Hopefully you shall enjoy it anyway. Went without prereaders too, which
might make it a little rough in some spots.

Never go without prereaders. They tell you when you use "clip" when you
mean "magazine." 

Or perhaps she had just stopped giving a damn about the whole thing.

Or prehaps she had a wedgie and this was the perfect time to remedy the
situation.

I see someone is of the "Mihoshi is more than she appears to be"
sentiment.

Mihoshi is far to verbal and coherent. She makes complicated points and
discusses involved topics with seeming ease. She's Mihoshi. She calmly
evaluates a potential combat situation and chooses a course of action.
She's Mihoshi. She doesn't freeze up in panic or be destructive while
bumbling and crying. She's Mihoshi. See my point?

Also, wouldn't Tenchi be just a bit surprised by this change in the
blond bubble head?

I see the Mihoshi Effect is still working fine though. Sure it managed
to defy more laws of physics than I previously thought possible in that
expanse of time, but thats Mihoshi.

I like Fera. If she dies, I shall be most upset.

Not much to say really. I liked it. Other than the problems with the
heroine, I really have nothing to say. Good job.

Miashara


-- .---Anime/Manga Fanfiction Mailing List---. | Administrators - ffml-admins@fanfic.com | | Unsubscribing - ffml-request@fanfic.com | | Put 'unsubscribe' in the subject | `---http://www.fanfic.com/FFML-FAQ.txt ---'