Subject: [FFML] Re: [Fanfic][Pokemon] Secrets
From: David Johnston
Date: 11/3/1999, 2:07 PM
To: Adrian Tymes
CC: Ace Sanchez <jsa@fl.net.au>, Fanfiction list <ffml@fanfic.com>

Adrian Tymes wrote:

Ace Sanchez wrote:

Still a few pokefans on the ffml I see ^_^. Okay, here's one I never put
on this list. (this was an experiment to see if I could write in a
completely different style with a character I don't usually write about).

Not bad...just one problem.  Professor Oak explicitly calls Gary his
"grandson".  He'd have to be in on this deception to do differently,
probably from before the series started.


Unless Professor Oak is the source of the situation.  After all there's 
no reason given in the story for why Gary is doing this.  She can't
be doing for occupational access, since there are almost as many female 
gym leaders as male.  In fact I thought that was the greatest weakness
of the story.  You have the twist, but it doesn't quite make sense
since her motivations remain unrevealed.




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