Part 11: Making Lemonade.
Authors Notes:
I've revised this part based on comments received from a number of people
on the FFML. Some concerns, like the fact that these two are rather young,
can't be changed, because that would make the plot impossible. Others
however have been changed. I'm particularly wondering if my Ranma and
Nodoka scene is working. It's what has caused the most delay. I'm working
on Part 12 at the moment, but it's going slowly. What I planned for that
part has been completely revised due to your comments. As it stands, the
remaining parts of this story will be:
Part 12: Opening Moves
Part 13: A toast to the young couple
Part 14: Ranma's Leavetaking.
I'm going to be changing addresses and websites soon, so I'm working on a
page for this work. If there is anyone out there who can make me a young
Akane and young Ranma grapic, please contact me.
Stephen
What has gone before:
Part 1: Akane meets Ranma at age 12. They spar. Akane walks in on Ranma
Part 2: Ryoga first appears. Ranma shows off in Gym class. Ranma is
challenged to teach the class gymnastics. Ranma walks in on Akane.
Part 3: Akane teaches the uneven bars. Sensei Ogawa has an agenda.
Nabiki takes a picture. Ranma walks in on Akane.
Part 4: Akane finds the picture. Akane and Ranma eat away from Nabiki
Ranma and Akane pull a joke on Nabiki that gets Akane a kiss. Ranma and
Akane talk in the bath.
Part 5: Ranma and Akane finish teaching gymnastics. The betrothal document
is found. Kasumi walks in on Ranma and Akane. Kasumi talks to Akane.
Part 6: Genma learns of Akane. Soun cries. Akane and Ranma walk on
fences. Nodoka appears.
Part 7: Nodoka plays sword master. Nabiki finds out what is planned for
her. Nabiki and Akane spar. Nodoka waits for Genma.
Part 8: Ranma has breakfast with his mother. Akane and Ranma talk about
his parents. Nabiki is teased during a lunch interrupted by Ryoga.
Ranma's move to the Tendos announced. Ranma finds out that Akane is ticklish.
Part 9: Ranma moves in. Kasumi talks with Nodoka. Soun evaluates Ranma.
Akane and Ranma fall asleep watching TV.
Part 10: Soun stops Genma from waking Ranma and Akane up. Ranma and Akane
engage in pillow fight. Ranma and Genma spar over pond. Soun decides to
reopen the Dojo. Nodoka talks Akane about sex.
Ranma had been sleeping rather soundly, until he was awakened by
eighty-five pounds of female flesh that bounded on to his bed. "Good
Morning, Ranma," Akane said.
"Morning, Akane," Ranma said, tossing off the covers. He'd kicked off his
boxers in the night, but Akane had already seen everything, so he wasn't
worried that she'd start screaming pervert because he had a hard on.
Akane moved to kiss Ranma, and he pulled her closer. His hands slipped
under her long t-shirt, raising it. Akane could feel his hard penis
pressed up against her vagina. After her talk with Ranma's mother, Akane
wanted to know what it felt like inside her, so she positioned herself so
it would enter her.
Suddenly their passion was cooled, as Kasumi's voice came from the
doorway. "Oh my!"
They pulled away from each other, embarrassed that they had been caught.
Akane pulled down her T-shirt. "We better get ready for school," she said,
exiting the room passed a shocked Kasumi.
"Right," Ranma said, closing the door.
Akane had almost finished putting on her school uniform when Kasumi
knocked on the door. Since she just had to tie the bow, and whoever it was
could help her with that, she said, "Come in."
"Akane, we need to talk," Kasumi said.
"What about," Akane said, turning around. "Could you tie my bow?"
"About what you and Ranma were doing this morning," Kasumi said, neatly
tying the bow. "It simply isn't proper."
"And what exactly isn't proper?" Akane asked, with a rather innocent
expression.
"You and Ranma shouldn't be getting so close," Kasumi replied.
"He's my fiancee," Akane replied, picking up her book bag. "I'm supposed
to be getting closer to him."
"Not that close," Kasumi said.
"Kasumi, sometimes you are just too traditional," Akane said, exiting her
room.
Kasumi followed her. "My behavior isn't in question," she said. "You are
only twelve years old, Akane. You're way too young to do that. And what
if you get pregnant?"
"Kasumi, you worry too much," Akane said, as they went down the stairs.
"Someone in this house has to," Kasumi remarked.
"Kasumi, I don't know why you've changed," Akane said, heading past the
kitchen. "But I want my big sister back."
Kasumi stopped at the kitchen door. Now even her sisters were spotting
her loss of sisterhood. Could she ever go back to being just the older
sister? The momentary question hung there for a moment, before the timer
went off. Then she was too busy finishing breakfast and preparing her
sister's lunches to consider it.
Ranma waited for his mother after school outside the Gym Office. He hoped
she wouldn't spend too much time talking with Sensei Ogawa. There she was,
finally. He'd heard his dad comment that his mom shouldn't be out working.
Dad had some strange ideas. Mom was good with her sword, and as Sensei
Ogawa said, it was the duty of an artist to pass on their talents.
Nodoka walked beside her son on their way to the Tendos. He looked like
he had some question to ask her, but every time he looked up ready to
speak, he looked down again at his feet. "Something on you mind, Ranma?"
Ranma looked back up, and blurted out, "I want to get Akane a ring."
"I see, and what brought this up?"
Ranma looked down at his feet as they continued to walk. "We're engaged
and they say she should get one from me."
"Hiroshi and Daisuke?" Nodoka asked. Ranma nodded. "Well, it is a
western tradition, but if you'd like to get Akane a ring, I'll help you buy
it. However, if you do, I want you two to set a date. Kasumi told me what
you almost did this morning. If you are going to be doing that, you are
going to have to be married before you continue your training trip."
"Why?"
"Because you might make Akane have a baby," Nodoka said. Seeing Ranma's
expression of disbelief, she continued. "Hasn't your father told you about
how babies are made?" Ranma shook his head as they entered the Tendo walls
"Then perhaps I should..."
Ranma was awake when Akane snuck into his room. Her figure was shown
rather nicely in the moonlight as she dropped her robe before climbing into
his bed. Her nude form snuggled up against his unclothed body. No words
had been exchanged to set this up, but both had known that it was going to
happen.
Akane had been wondering about how it would feel to have Ranma inside her
since his mother had given her the talk about the birds and the bees.
Nodoka had recommended that if she wanted to really know what it felt like,
she should do it with Ranma. She pulled him on top of her, feeling his
hard sex pressing against her lower stomach.
Ranma began to kiss Akane. Her smooth skin rubbing against him was
arousing him. As he moved against her, he felt Akane pushing him down. He
moved down so that his hard shaft was posed at Akane's entrance. With one
smooth stroke, their virginities surrendered to each other. Then they
began moving, Ranma thrusting to meet Akane's hips. Each move caused Akane
to moan softly with pleasure. Pleasure built until suddenly, Ranma thrust
deeply into his fiancee, and sent his seed deep inside her.
The feeling of his penis pulsing her body full of his sperm, was too much
for Akane. She climaxed, her vagina milking out every last drop of Ranma's
semen, her cry of pleasure loud.
The effort was too much for the couple, and they drifted off to sleep,
their sweaty bodies still joined under the tangled covers.
Before dawn the next morning, Akane sneaked out of Ranma's room,
preferring not to advertise her new status with Ranma. If she hadn't made
so much noise the previous night, nor more when she and Ranma had done it
again just minutes before, she might have succeeded. Instead, Nabiki stood
by the door. It appeared that she'd been waiting all night, judging from
the pillow in the hallway.
"So, do you want to tell me what it felt like, or should I tell Dad that
Ranma has made his youngest daughter a woman?" Nabiki asked.
"You wouldn't?" Akane replied, walking a little gingerly towards her room.
"Akane, you know better than to ask that question," Nabiki said, pursuing
her sister.
Akane opened the door to her room, and gestured for Nabiki to enter before
her. "What do you want to know," Akane said. "And what ever I tell you
doesn't leave this room."
"Ah, you're no fun," Nabiki replied.
"I mean it," Akane said, sitting on her bed. "It could really ruin my
reputation. If I hear that anything I tell you gets out, it will mean both
me and Ranma 'train' you."
"Okay," Nabiki said, turning Akane's desk chair around and sitting in it,
propping her head up on it's back.
"Where to start..." Akane began.
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