Subject: Re: [FFML][Spam] Question...
From: LunaHNeko@aol.com
Date: 7/22/1999, 1:22 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

Ok, now I have another question...  The following is a section from the 
fan-fic I'm currently working on (I've got about 8-9 in the works and none of 
them are finished...), and I wanted to know what everyone thought of this:

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	"Tenchi?" Washu said.
	"What is it?"
	"Why is your house built next to a shabby shrine deep in the 
mountains?" she asked.
	Daaaaaah...
	"Just kidding!  I was monitoring your conversation when you first 
contacted the Goddess Technical Helpline..."

<!--end fan-fic section-->

At the "Daaaaaah..." part, could you tell that Tenchi was facefaulting?  
Before I'd learned the word, that's how I used to explain things (either 
that, or "So-and-so fell over from disbelief.")  I don't think it's necessary 
to add in a "I facefaulted", and "Daaaaaah..." makes it more...humorous?  
Well, I don't know, that's why I'm asking your opinion (again).  Please 
forgive me if I'm generating too much spam, you can e-mail me privately if 
you wish.

~Princess Hinomura Runa of the House of Jurai Royal Family
Oujosama to Oyobi!  Call me Princess!
(LunaHNeko@aol.com & Luna_Hinomura@planetjurai.com).

Ok, maybe just "Luna" will do...  ^_^