Ok, now I have another question... The following is a section from the
fan-fic I'm currently working on (I've got about 8-9 in the works and none of
them are finished...), and I wanted to know what everyone thought of this:
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"Tenchi?" Washu said.
"What is it?"
"Why is your house built next to a shabby shrine deep in the
mountains?" she asked.
Daaaaaah...
"Just kidding! I was monitoring your conversation when you first
contacted the Goddess Technical Helpline..."
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At the "Daaaaaah..." part, could you tell that Tenchi was facefaulting?
Before I'd learned the word, that's how I used to explain things (either
that, or "So-and-so fell over from disbelief.") I don't think it's necessary
to add in a "I facefaulted", and "Daaaaaah..." makes it more...humorous?
Well, I don't know, that's why I'm asking your opinion (again). Please
forgive me if I'm generating too much spam, you can e-mail me privately if
you wish.
~Princess Hinomura Runa of the House of Jurai Royal Family
Oujosama to Oyobi! Call me Princess!
(LunaHNeko@aol.com & Luna_Hinomura@planetjurai.com).
Ok, maybe just "Luna" will do... ^_^