Subject: Re: [FFML] [Tenchi][Teaser] Sasami's Wish
From: "Philip Hacker" <prohackr@hotmail.com>
Date: 4/11/1999, 1:11 AM
To: lwf58@earthlink.net, ffml@fanfic.com


   Hi!  This looks like it could be an interesting idea.  Am I right 
in
thinking that the two trees in Tenchi's dream represent Sasami and 
Tsunami?

I would agree with that idea.



she sneered.
"I'm suprised the great MOKU chose you."

   MOKU?  Must be a new character you are introducing.  Sasami was 
chosen by
Tsunami, one of the three "goddesses" of the Tenchi universe.  It 
seems
unlikely that another would dare to poach on her territory.  Also, 
Sasami does
have premonitory dreams because of her link to Tsunami, but they have 
never
been so specific before.  If there is a reason for "MOKU" to be 
interested in
Sasami, there would be obstacles to "choosing" her.  Perhaps you can 
rephrase
or expand this idea?


"Moku" is one of the readings for the character for "tree". Thus, "the 
great Moku" is "the great Tree".

Phil 
 
prohackr@hotmail.com 


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