Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic] [Ranma 1/2] [mid-Dark] Leaving, Prologue
From: kleppe@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe)
Date: 3/25/1999, 11:15 AM
To: "Sylvain Daoust" <ranma_666@HOTMAIL.COM>
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

This story really fails to convince me that Ranma's actions are
believable for him. Contrary to what you sometimes see in fanfics, in
the manga he doesn't seem to mind his fiancee situation all that much.
He's worked a lot harder to *preserve* the status quo (the "Reversal
Jewel" story, for example) than he ever has to end it. There really has
to be something very extraordinary that happened to push him to this
point; I can't believe he'd do this just because he's fed up.

Also, I don't think the "last three" (who I presume are Kuno, Ryoga, and
Mousse, though it doesn't say) would be insensitive enough to be
gloating over Ranma's death. They might possibly think it's a trick --
something which the lack of a body will only reinforce -- especially
after they find out that Akane and Shampoo still aren't interested in
them.