A most excellent fic. Momoji seems to be a bit OOC, I think, not
quite as clumsy or bubbly as she normally is - but it's been a while
since I saw the end of the series, and maybe this is a change
brought about by the whole Aragami experience. Other than that,
looks good.
One nit, however. Your editor seems to be set to something other
than 70 characters per line. Looks real funky in my reader, and
hard to read in places. The only detractment in an otherwise
excellent work. I'm looking forward to more.
Derek