Subject: Re: [FFML][Fanfic][Blue Seed][draft] From The Ashes Ch.3
From: doppleganger@pipeline.com
Date: 3/19/1999, 3:41 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

A most excellent fic. Momoji seems to be a bit OOC, I think, not 
quite as clumsy or bubbly as she normally is - but it's been a while 
since I saw the end of the series, and maybe this is a change 
brought about by the whole Aragami experience. Other than that, 
looks good. 

One nit, however. Your editor seems to be set to something other 
than 70 characters per line. Looks real funky in my reader, and 
hard to read in places. The only detractment in an otherwise 
excellent work. I'm looking forward to more.


Derek