First lemon for UY:TSY. C&C is welcome
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Well, that's as sparse a lemon as I've ever seen. I assume "CONTENT"
refers to Lum's naked body, and "NOT PLAINTEXT" refers to her alien
physiology. "REMOVED", however, is a euphemism I've not heard before.
I think you need to spice it up a little.
Lum displayed her CONTENT artfully. Ataru leered and proceeded to
REMOVE her energetically. "Ah, have I ever told you," Lum said shyly.
"I am NOT fully PLAINTEXT". "In which way are you n- ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!"
Ataru screamed. "I'm sorry," Lum murmured. "No one ever told you
about the teeth, huh?"
-Richard