Subject: Re: [FFML] [UY:TSY][Lemon]Clothes make the woman
From: "Richard Lawson" <sterman@uswest.net>
Date: 3/5/1999, 3:40 PM
To: "MR WILLIAM R GEIGER" <PHPN65A@prodigy.com>, <ffml@fanfic.com>

First lemon for UY:TSY. C&C is welcome

-- Name   : CLOTHES2.DOC
-- Content: application/octet-stream
-- CONTENT REMOVED, NOT PLAINTEXT.

Well, that's as sparse a lemon as I've ever seen.  I assume "CONTENT"
refers to Lum's naked body, and "NOT PLAINTEXT" refers to her alien
physiology.  "REMOVED", however, is a euphemism I've not heard before.

I think you need to spice it up a little.

Lum displayed her CONTENT artfully.  Ataru leered and proceeded to
REMOVE her energetically.  "Ah, have I ever told you," Lum said shyly.
"I am NOT fully PLAINTEXT".  "In which way are you n- ARGH!!!!!!!!!!!"
Ataru screamed.  "I'm sorry," Lum murmured.  "No one ever told you
about the teeth, huh?"

-Richard