Subject: re:[FFML] Yea! She responded! Captain America 2 is started!
From: HARIJUBAL@aol.com
Date: 2/18/1999, 3:33 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

Ok, obviously I missed something, cause . . . well this bit just sprung out at
me.  Ranma/Cap saying "Nabiki-chan"?
Well, there's that and the . . . mm . . . interesting dialogue. Frankly, that
whole exchange between the three was a bit painful.  No offense intended.
Sorry.
Akane using ki to make the mallet . . . well, that's one explanation.  Of
course, one round against the Taskmaster and BLAMMO!  Would be an interesting
fight, actually.
Golly, this has a lot of mixed continuity here. It has the Spidey-clone (THE
SPIDEY-CLONE!!!!!  ARGH!!!! ARGH!!!), but it also has Franklin Richards as
Tattletale.  yeah, nobody here is a Power Pack otaku . . .
Other than the rather painful dialogue (Sorry) between the three Nerimans, and
the equally painful exposition (Sorry) on Nabiki's part (I would think that
Iron Fist would have explained chi to them at some point), it was . . . pretty
good.
Would like to see more, though.  And the bit that came before this, if only to
understand what went on before.

-Murmur the Fallen