Subject: [FFml][fic][evangelion][draft2] Evangelion 1000:1
From: Ryoga@Norfolk-County.com
Date: 2/8/1999, 1:42 AM
To: "ffml@fanfic.com" <ffml@fanfic.com>


Hello again!

This is the second draft of the first of my fiction.  I made a lot of
mistakes the first time around.

Copyrights:  Shin Seiki Evangelion is owned by Gainax.  All use in the
story of
Character and there likeness is only for entertainment use.



^_^   Enjoy (again)



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 tick tock tick tock tick tock.

        Sleven's clock ticks away on his desk. The light flickers in his
room flickers a little. The generator is getting old, it is due for a
major cleaning The light illuminates the room, but just barely. Many of
the houses in this area are equipped with generators. The price of
hooking up to the cities power plants are costly. Not very many people
can afford hooking up to the cities plants. Most people make do with the
generator for lighting and some radio programing. Others just use oil
lamps for lighting, and read the Neon Bible.  The Stoves are powered by
propane gas, vehicles are powered by gasoline, and people still pick and
grown there own food.

  It has been 1000 years since the 3rd coming. Its is the year 3015.


                                   Neon Genesis Evangelion 1000:1
                                         "Here we go again."


        Sleven sits in his room, studying for his classes at school. An
Arithmetic book lies on his bed. Geography of the United Government of
America, sits over to near his door. Physics and English books lie next
to his chair. Sleven is looking through the book that is used around his
last and most disliked class, Worlds Rebirth.

        The course called "The Worlds Rebirth" is the life and history
of everything that lead up to and after affects when the third coming,
came. It a course that is taught very lightly though out first to ninth
grades. In the sophomore year the students must all about it. Sleven
hated this class, and he did so with a passion. The homework was mostly
boring, writing papers on what you think about Tesla 15:7 or what might
happened if the sons and daughters of Susami entered the forbidden area,
like they were told not to.

        Sleven hated most was the book, "The Neon Genesis". A book which
was spread to every Neo-Country, and put in every known language. It is
the symbol of hope and prosperity of the new world.

(Load of crap), thought Sleven, as he read some of the passages.

     Shinji 21:14 The Angle hovered to us, floating on the wind like it
     was a feather. Not a sound was made from it. When we tried to
     get     close, it destroyed anything it consider dangerous. Shinji
     21:15 As the Angel flew, it stopped right above our underground
     sanctuary, as if is saw something of value. Continuing to float in
     the air as if suspended by a rope from heaven, it started  to
     drill.

(Drill? Angles know how to use power tools?) "HA! What a load of crap!"
He said.

Flipping near the middle of the book, Sleven read another passage.

     Kaoru 19:22 Being betrayed was not a feeling humans like, but human
     we both were,  but still I felt something different about him.
     Kaoru 19:23 As I beheld him, in the room were I didn't even know
     existed, in the grasp of the holy armour. He revelled to me that he
     was not of human. Kaoru 19:24 For in  my arms did I held one who
     would be in my sole, my brother. Kaoru 19:25 My arms shook, afraid
     of what he had said. Saying that he is one of gods army. Kaoru
     19:26 In my amazement, he smiled as he told that he want to
     understand what it was like to be human.

        (A human who was in actuality a angle?) "Bullshit" spoke Sleven,
as he shut the book
and tossed it on to his bed. Sleven stretched to loosen the joints that
have been crammed in to the chair for the last 3 hours now.

"What does this have to do with me? I don't believe any of it."

    Staring at the book that lies slightly twisted on his bed, he
sighed. (Mo did pay a bit for that  version) With a deep sigh. Sleven
picks the book up off the floor. As he picks it up a page that was
semi-open displays the first moments of the after affects of the 3rd
coming.


     Neo Genesis 00:1 The sky red with the blood of rebirth. No sunset
     would ever compare to hues and the shades that sky wrought. Neo
     Genesis 00:2  Reds that would  put an apple or a fire engine to
     shame. The sky moved as if it were liquid, like blood. So red that
     even Satan would be ashamed of his dull Hell..
     Neo Genesis 00:3 In the bloody red sky, shades of lighter hue were
     soon to wash through. It is as if the stain of blood were being
     cleansed away by Mother Nature herself.  Neo Genesis 00:4 Time
     passes as we sit, us the new Adam and Eve of Earth. Colours of
     crimson and gold sweep by in the sky, Saying to us that the world
     must start a new.  Neo Genesis 00:5 The worlds is a quiet place.
     There is no honking of horns, or yelling of taxi cab drivers. All
     the population of earth has now disappeared.

"That is impossible, the gods put us here. and then they take us away.
"Why?" He shouts to himself. "People just don't  disappear. They don't."




End of 1000:1


That part one...... let see if i can actually make a part two...

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"What if we are the fallen ones?" - Eric W. Stockwell