The idea here is an interesting one... though, to be fair, a lot of
other characters in the series seem to go out of their way to get hit
too. (Come to think of it, it WOULD explain a lot about Kuno-chan....
:-))

Anyway, the problem with this, IMO, is that it seems to rush through the
story. I think you got to the punchline too quickly, and missed a lot of
good potential dramatic scenes that could've been there. It's good, but
it has potential to be better.


Gary