Subject: Re: [FFML] [FF][Robotech] Tales of the Wanderer: Book 2, Episode1 |
From: CookSuxXL@aol.com |
Date: 2/1/1999, 4:11 PM |
To: Starrngr@aol.com, ffml@fanfic.com |
True, this seems to be somewhat boring...just implement more action into it, although I don't know where you can...add it. But to my disdain, I haven't read your previous Book, and maybe if I did, I would give it a fair remark. But if this was a bit more exciting, it could be a lot better. Anyways, don't be offended, it's just creative criticism.