Subject: Re: [FFML][Fanfic][R1/2] Shampoo 1/2: Chapter 40: The Breaking of the Circle
From: "Freemage ." <freemage@hotmail.com>
Date: 1/17/1999, 9:12 PM
To: sommer@3rdm.net
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

Well, now, isn't that just Extra-Special?

OK, the quick break-down:

Happi in Heaven:  Whaddya wanna bet he gets some sort of Earthly 
assignment, real quick?  Either that or Urd will palm him off on 
Mara....

Death & Seer/Domino & Oblivion:

Hmmmm....  A bit talky, espeically if there's going to be a continuation 
of all this at some point--it would have been better to resolve a lot of 
these "mysteries of the Cosmos" then.  Maybe some kind of action or 
humour scene between these would've helped.

R&S vs. Gemma:

Excellent fight scene, friend!  Gemma's fate was appropriately nasty.  
And while Shamps won't be able to go home again, at least Kasumi will be 
able to teach her all the ancient Amazon Lore, right?  ^_^

Farewells:

Nice.  Very nice.  And it included a totally gratutitous lawyer joke, 
too, which gets double points!  Ranma and Shamps' departing banter was 
excellent.  Poor Aki, she doesn't get anyone....

Hmmm... is Kasumi going to be trained by the elders, or vice versa?

I take it Akane is going to be discussed in one or more of the 
Epilogues?

I can't wait to find out what Nabiki's angle to all this is going to be.

Oh, and btw:  WHAT ABOUT KASUMI?  Sorry, but that thread is probably the 
most annoying of all, by my count.  It just screams "spinoff".

Looking forward to the Epilogues.

--Freemage

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