Below is a revision of the first chapter of my Eva fanfic, The New 
Age.

Aside from the fact that I can't see either Rei II or Rei III talking 
like the Rei in this one, this part of the fic okey.  The emotional 
pouring of those two (Shinji and Asuka) though were too abrupt, totally 
not like them...they tend to build up...even in life and death 
situations.

Thanks for your time...

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