I love it.

There's no other word I can say for this story, I found
it to be one of the best I've ever read. The writing, not so much in
the later chapters, but in the earlier ones centered on Ranma, is
simply delicious. The mystic part of the story is very well done.

However, nothing is perfect. Here's something I found could be
improved in the later chapters: This story started out as a story
about Ranma confronting a young Cologne. All right. But after I don't
remember how many chapters, Ranma's story was interrupted roughly to
center on the characters back in Japan. After that, we heard very
little about Ranma, which kind of lessened my appreciation of the
story. Also, a lot of chapters are centered solely on one or two
characters only, which becomes boring. In a story whose chapters are
as long as this and which has so many different things happening, I
found the chapters could have been a bit more diverse.

Luv,
Ajax



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