{Paul}
  Ah, here we are. Hmm. Is it just me, or does the bulk of this
  episode seem more like Sailor Moon and less like Ranma? Though not

  Hmm, that wasn't my intention, as I don't watch Sailor Moon to any 
great length (sure, I know what goes on in the story so my mom can 
understand it (I have to explain everything to her at great lengths as 
if *I* were the foremost expert on something I don't watch, therefore I 
research the stuff for her on the net ("Why isn't there a Sailor 
Saturn?" "Don't get ahead of yourself....")), and enough to think that 
Wiseman was the only villain in the series that I could respect-- sort 
of).

  so shot through with cliches as part six, I caught a few... about
  love, this time, rather than combat. *piku* Must... resist...

  Actually, I wrote some of those cliches in part 6 as a sort of parody 
tribute (especially Kodachi's "I will punish you!" line, the most 
blatent :)

  analogy.... *shudder* Anyway... another story with technically
  solid writing, very nicely scripted fight scenes, and a premise
  that I don't think anyone else has matched for originality. It's

  Thank you. 

  not quite so segmented as the first few chapters of the series,
  which is a good thing... a story which flows of its own accord is
  as pleasant to read as one which doesn't need to be interrupted
  with "What does THIS mean?" every few paragraphs. What happens

  Good! I was wondering about that every time I edited the sucker :)

  seems rather natural, even if a few things are explained as they
  happen... all in all, very solid writing, with a touch of spectacle
  here and there. 15 or 16 out of 20.

  Once again, thanks. 

"That's my story and I'm sticking to it."--JMS, creator of Babylon 5. 
"If you go to Z'ha'dum, you will die."--Kosh, Babylon 5.
"Understanding is a three-edged sword."--Kosh, Babylon 5. 
"Never show your hand until the end."--me, being profound. 

--Razorclaw X

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