Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic] [R 1/2] [FKC] Akane-chan Change chapter 1, 2nd draft
From: "Razorclaw X" <spiceoflife@hotmail.com>
Date: 8/30/1998, 7:14 PM
To: brian_kun@hotmail.com
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

Well, in the canon, Ranma only touched Akane at the end. Here it's for 
real, with Ranma getting in a dozen hits, so I decided to let Akane 
get 
in just one hit.

Ranma getting in hits?  Sorry, but isn't that at least slightly OOC?  
Ranma wouldn't hit a girl if he could help it.

  More likely because he thinks it isn't 'macho' to fight girls (which 
is a completely different reason why Kuno doesn't fight girls (he never 
went all-out against Akane, for example)). Of course, when he's in girl 
form, all bets are off.... 

Exceptions:
The Rythmic gymnastics story arc (Kodachi)

  He was a girl at the time. 

The Ice-skating competition (Asuza)

  Ditto. 

The Ms. Hinako storyline (Hinako)

  Well, he TRIED.... heh, heh. 

Ukyo's introduction (Ukyo, he thought she was a guy)

  Hmmm, the only times Ranma 'hit' Ukyo was with the spatula and the 
rubber soba, wasn't it? Otherwise, I don't think he actually hit her at 
all (if we take 'hit' to mean physically-connecting a blow, and neither 
the spatula nor the soba were it). 

The Koi-fishing rod story (Akane)

  Don't know that story, I admit. 

These are just the ones that come immedeatly to mind.

  Ditto. 

"That's my story and I'm sticking to it."--JMS, creator of Babylon 5. 
"If you go to Z'ha'dum, you will die."--Kosh, Babylon 5.
"Understanding is a three-edged sword."--Kosh, Babylon 5. 
"Never show your hand until the end."--me, being profound. 

--Razorclaw X

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