Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fic][Ranma] Ishi o Tsukairu, Part 1
From: "John Lemon" <jlemon@hotmail.com>
Date: 8/26/1998, 3:17 PM
To: dar@thekeep.org
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

Interesting beginning. The big question is how is Ranma going to handle 
the Tech of 'pinning' the will. If it wears off, he could find himself 
in a heck of alot of trouble when the pinning wears off.

Why couldn't he just explain the look as an accident? I mean, he lands 
at her feet, she screams PERVERT, and sends him rocketing off. Akane 
dosn't move away, or hold in her skirt. You'd almost think she wants him 
to see her so she has an excuse to bash him.

Also, is Ranma going to be studying any of the other techs in the book?

Just my thoughts.

--John

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