Ranma 1/2 Fanfic - Hard hangover (Part 2 of ? of the Hentai adept series)
*** WARNING *** *** LEMON FANFIC ***
This fanfic may contain sexually explicit material and is
not to be read by anyone under the age of 18. If you're
under 18, I don't really care because who actually listens
to these warnings anyway?
Disclaimer: All the characters in this fic are the work
and intellectual property of Rumiko
Takahashi. These characters are not owned
by me and I hope that I won't be sued for
using them as players in my sick, twisted
stories.
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Hard Hangover
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Shampoo and Ryouga lay asleep on the floor of Nekohanten. Ryouga
sleeping soundly on top of the girl. Upon closer inspection one could
notice the fact that from the waist down both were nude and that Ryouga
appeared to still have his prick in a postion close to Shampoo's cleft.
Several hours after thier mutually-unwanted sexual encounter
Shampoo awoke. She felt quite claustrophobic, lying under the large
teenager who had ridden her. She felt his chest on her back, and his soft
prick still touched her between the legs. She began to rise, attempting
to lift herself from beneath him but it was to no avail. Ryouga was heavy
and Shampoo's arms were in such a position as she could not get them under
her with enough strength to push him off. At her attempt he merely
groaned and actually moved so that he pinned her even more.
Shampoo realized this was not going to work and so she tried a
different approach.
"Ryouga, wake up." she said. He didn't respond.
"Ryouga. Wake up!" she said with more force. He stirred slightly.
"RYOUGA! SHAMPOO SAY WAKE UP!" she yelled, annoyed. Ryouga blinked his
eyes and rolled over as Shampoo pushed herself to her knees.
He rolled on his side and rubbed his eyes. When he opened his eyes
he was looking directly at a purple-haired girl, half naked, looking at him
with a half-furious, half-terrified expression.
"Shampoo? What...am...I...?" Ryouga looked around. He was far from an
expert at knowing where he was, but Ryouga knew the Nekohanten.
"What am I doing here?" he mumbled aloud, trying not to look at the girl's
face, or the fact that she was doing her best not to reveal her half-naked
body to him. Shampoo looked at him with big eyes; in a face that might
shatter into tears at any moment.
He remembered walking into the restaurant late at night; he had of
course been looking for the Tendo Dojo to pay back Ranma for some reason or
another he didn't remember at the moment.
Ryouga rememered sitting down and having been offered some Ramen,
and, seeing as how he had been looking for the Dojo all day accepted
Shampoo's gift of food.
"But what happened after that?" he asked himself whispering. Looking up at
Shampoo, her pants lying on the floor, his pulled down around his ankles,
Shampoo acting the way she was...even a thick-headed fool like him could
figure out what had happened.
"Oh, my god. What happened after that?"
Shampoo sat with her knees pulled up against her chest in the fetal
position. Her head was fighting with itself. One side blamed Ryouga for
doing this to her. The second, and more rational side told her that it
wasn't really his fault. <Why did Ryouga have to eat *THAT* ramen?> the one
side said. <It was that stupid Mousse that served it> the second reminded
her. But she could not seem to resolve the conflict and a moment later it
fell into chaos.
"Shampoo....need a bath..." she said.
Ryouga looked up and nodded at her. He tried not to watch as she
stood up, a slight limp in her step that appeared to come from her
midsection. She picked up her pants and walked to the back where a full
bathroom was.
When she had shut the door to the bathroom Ryouga sighed.
"What have I done to her? What happened last night?" he hit his head on the
floor, making it splinter as he sorted through the fractal images of the
previous night.
He remembered little after he had eaten the ramen. Fighting hard,
he got some broken images to appear in his head. They did not please him.
"I...r...raped shampoo..." he said to his own unbelieving ears.
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Shampoo closed the door and put her back to it. Leaning against it
she began to sob. <Why did this have happen to me?> she thought.
It wasn't that she didn't enjoy the act; she had been completely
prepared for rough sex, after all what else had she prepared that potion
for, after all? She absent-mindedly put her hand to her stomach, her
vagina very sore from the act a few hours ago.
"Shampoo fault. It not Ryouga..." she told herself sternly, trying to
convince herself. Even with her attempted resolve, the tears would not
cease flowing from her eyes.
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"Akane!" Ryouga nearly burst out in horror. "I have betrayed Akane!"
He was about to continue with his self beating when Shampoo exited
from the bath. He looked up at her. She now wore a new dress and looked
good except for the look on her face and her red eyes. He could tell she
had been crying.
"Shampoo...I..." Ryouga said to her but Shampoo held up her hand to speak.
"Shampoo need to tell you something." she paused for a moment, "Shampoo
make potion for Ranma; Shampoo put potion in Ramen... and you Ryouga eat
Ramen."
Ryouga was silent for a moment.
"You mean that... what just happened just now was... because of that Ramen
that I ate?" he looked at her incredulously. She smiled weakly, "Hai."
Again, the boy was silent.
"Shampoo, I'm... sorry this happened..." Ryouga said after a moment.
"Shampoo sorry too." she said softly.
"I... I'm... sorry if I hurt you..." he managed to say to her, not meeting
her gaze.
"Shampoo alright...just sore..." she replied in a voice that she tried to
make sound nonchalant.
They were both silent for a long time. Again, Ryouga spoke.
"Are you alright, otherwise...?" he asked her with a serious look.
"Shampoo be alright," she thought deeply for a moment. "After all...
Shampoo not dislike all that much."
Ryouga was taken aback. She had enjoyed it?
"You... liked it, Shampoo?" he blurted out.
Shampoo searched inwardly for a long moment. The strange thing
about the whole affair was that she *HAD* enjoyed it. She wasn't so broken
up now, and looking at Ryouga now she realized it didn't really bother her
that she had sex with him. Earlier, when she saw the experience at a
negative, the pain was intense. The only thing was, it wasn't logical.
Shampoo had been looking for sex, and she had gotten what she was looking
for.
She really wished that Ranma would have been the one who she went
through this with, but Ryouga was not a bad person for unwittingly eating
the food. She was by far at the most fault. In fact, after she realized
this she felt a kind of closeness to Ryouga; something she had never felt
before. But she also felt that she had wronged him, by making him play
this role. Shampoo felt dishonored.
The act itself had it's own... rewards. Shampoo thought again about
the pain that was still present in her lower region.
<It was so violent> she told herself. To many people this would have been a
negative comment, but it Shampoo's thought; Shampoo loved violence.
Yes, in retrospect, she had enjoyed it.
Shampoo nodded her head and smiled for the first time tonight.
Ryouga was relieved by this, but he also wasn't completely convinced.
He didn't work to hard on it, though, he had a crisis of his own.
<Akane.> he thought, <I have betrayed her>.
His began leaving his physical attention behind and diving into
the turmoil inside his head as Shampoo reached over and kissed him on the
forehead.
"Ryouga, go. We talk later." Shampoo said to him, almost brightly.
He nodded at her, a short time away would give them both time to
think about what they now meant to each other.
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Shampoo was soundly asleep by the time that Cologne finally got
home. Mousse had come in earlier that night through the back and, luckily
for Shampoo and Ryouga, gone straight to his room. Shampoo sighed with
almost wonderment and thought about her future husband.
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Ryouga walked out into the night. Not sure of where to go, he just
walked towards the country. To go out and reflect upon what a night it
had been.
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To be continued...
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Author's Notes:
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Well, back to popular demand I have written the second part. I hope
everyone is not dissappointed in the fact that this part contained no lemon
material but I felt I needed to reflect on what I wrote in the first part.
After I recieved much feedback from the first, I realized that I had
some demeaning (to Shampoo) sections in my book. I attempted to rectify
them in this section by giving her a little more conscience. I could not,
however, leave her devistated by this event. Although many may consider
this a rape fic to this point, I do not see it that way in the eyes of the
characters. For this reason I had Shampoo get over her anger and not be
overcome by it.
Secondly, about my feedback. I recieved many positive comments
concerning the story. But my thanks go out to one individual who sent me a
letter pointing out grammatical errors and other messups I made in sentance
structure (I probably should have looked at it more. After all, I *DID*
write it at 1 in the morning, while falling asleep; I was bound to make
mistakes). I *DO* have normally good grammar but I guess that in this
instance I did not do enough proofreading (my major downfall, I hate
proofreading!!!!). For this I intend to find someone who can help me to
proofread my work before I publish it. One fine gentleman has already
offered this, but I would appreciate others.
Lastly, I thank all the people who gave responses to my first work.
Without those responses I feel I would not have written this. This work
will (probably) be posted in RAAC along with the next chapter, so that all
those of you who read this for the Hentai value won't be bored. :)
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Write time: 1:23 minutes
Revision time: 28 minutes
4/2/97
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