Jeeeeeeeehaw! A Slayers fanfic, a pure Slayers fanfic. And an excellent
pure Slayers fanfic while we are at it! Oh, how I have waited for this 
day...<Soun Tendo(tm) waterworks> ^_^

Okay, to comments.

It'd be nice to know where this is placed, timeline-wise. My guess
is after NEXT, but before TRY, but I could be completely wrong here.
The characters themselves seem to be mostly IC, but Lina's sounding
a little too amelialish for my taste. She isn't normally that hyper,
IMHO. And then Amelia herself. She seems to have become a cross between
NukuNuku and Mihoshi (not that that's very far from what she is
in the anime...) but she's more in sugar high than usually. But maybe
that's just the excitement of getting to travel with Lina again.
Oh, yeah, while I am in it: Amelia calls Lina always 'Lina-san', AFAIK.
At least in everything I've seen (the SSs stuff and beginning of NEXT)
it's always Lina-san. 

Now, the story itself was very Slayers. All that stuff in the room where
the mirror was kept was hilarious. Thought that camera reminded me of
Discworld a little too much... ^_^ And the idea of a magicon was absolutely
great. I'm just wondering how all those sidekicks could fit into a broom
closet. Must be magic. ^_^ And the way Philionel handled Lina's break-in.
Hilarious. Thought I did expect that a few of the other mages would try
to retaliate...

Also, I was wondering how Lina could win Freestyle Destructive Magic with
just the Dragon Slave. After all, even Zolf knew it, so it's gotta be common
knowledge. Maybe they gave points for style too. And nobody can beat Lina
in style when it's about destruction. ^_^

Well, the ending gave me a little start. I didn't expect you to bring Naga
in. Or actually I didn't expect you to bring Naga in when she hadn't 
sought out Lina in the magicon. After all, Naga just LOVES to annoy
her friend/greatest rival. Does this mean, BTW, that we're going to see
the Naga-clones too? 

Now, I'll just settle down to wait for the real villians to show up. ^_^
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