From: KLEPPE@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe)
To: ffml@fanfic.com
Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic][R1/2] Cursed Koi Pond [Prologue] [First
fic]
Date: Fri, 06 Mar 1998 20:38:28 GMT
The premise here has a lot of potential for great laughs. I can't wait
to see how much Happosai will be able to get away with when he meets
Ukyo and Shampoo in his new cursed form. BWAHAHA!! Please continue!
Actually, I'm interested in seeing what happens when Happi starts to
consider the...advantages of his new form. See if you follow my
reasoning here:
1) Happi's chi gets stronger when in contact with female flesh.
2) Happi now has access to a non-retreating supply of same
(him/herself).
3) Happi's supply of chi is now, theoretically, infinite.
You may all shudder in fear, now.
--Freemage
Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics
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