By the way, I'm not too thrilled about the title.

The best I can think of is "Dame Fortune has the last laugh" or "Dame 
Fortune's Last Laugh".
I practically figured out the ending after reading that Keiichi was killed. 
I am surprised that Belldandy stayed long enough for the funeral though. 
Then again, maybe not....

his motorcycle was sideswiped by car being driven by some drunken 

salaryman

Keiichi's bike is a sidecar. Would it be that vulnerable it a swipe? Just 
curious.

Well, he couldn't deny that Dame Fortune had smiled down upon him by 

removing Morisato >from the picture.

If only he knew who he was chasing.

she'll practically deify him.

She'll probably deify him literally.

I don't think I could compete with that.

Not that you ever had a chance.

"Well, she's familiar with love hotels, that much I know."

I believe she saw it on TV.

Could Morisato's amazing luck have allowed him to even cheat death?

In a way, yes. Even death will not keep them apart....

He shook himself slightly as Urd shunted the door open.  Oh, and that was 

Skuld following >behind.

While you might be able to make up an excuse for Urd, I'm sure Skuld would 
have gone back with Belldandy already. I have an idea. How about Toshi 
finding Megumi the only one at temple, packing her brother's effects? Then 
she tells him that she came over after hearing that the sisters were 
leaving. It will have the same effect on the fic, but could leave another 
girl in his hands though.....

A number of boxes of memorabilia had been piled up into a corner,

Belldandy wouldn't do that, she'd take them with her or vanish them like in 
OAV 5.

"No, she's gone home... to be with Keiichi.  Home to be with our Father."

And out of your dirty hands forever!

It must be Dame Fortune herself, he thought to himself, as he ran 

desperately into the night.

It probably was. Being who she was after all....

Well, the ending was worth it. Even if you had to kill Keiichi to get 
there, even though he and Belldandy will probably be together forever in 
Heaven.
All in all, a good fic.��