Subject: [FFML] [C&C] Long and winding road 2
From: "Sean Justice" <justice@nlci.com>
Date: 2/23/1998, 10:17 PM
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CC: <ffml@fanfic.com>

Boy, I feel good.  Wiped out over a hundred messages today.  Leaves me with
only 2110 messages in the queue!

*sigh*

Anyway, I just got around to finding this and read it.  Excellent story.  I
really loved the nod to Bast in there.  Now if only we could get him to put
out somemore Ranko 1/2...

Couple of nits...

1) I've never seen Kodachi as the patient type.  I don't know that she would
wait once she located Ranma.
2) What happened to Akane?  She was only a day behind them from the
monastery, and made *to* the monastery in less time than they took.  She
should have been able to beat them back unless something happened.
3) Where was C-ko?  The A-ko (Eiiko) and B-ko (Biiko) you used were pretty
distinctive, what did you do to them so that Eiiko could merrily run off
with Akane?

*whap* must fight hentai thoughts.... *thudthudthudthud*

Sorry.  Anyway, I loved the scenes with Ranma and his mother.  It'd be
interesting if Nodoka realizes that she was doing a *perfect* Akane
impersonation there at the end...

-- Magister
You really hate Genma don't you?  Hurt him once for me, ne?