Boy, I feel good. Wiped out over a hundred messages today. Leaves me with
only 2110 messages in the queue!
*sigh*
Anyway, I just got around to finding this and read it. Excellent story. I
really loved the nod to Bast in there. Now if only we could get him to put
out somemore Ranko 1/2...
Couple of nits...
1) I've never seen Kodachi as the patient type. I don't know that she would
wait once she located Ranma.
2) What happened to Akane? She was only a day behind them from the
monastery, and made *to* the monastery in less time than they took. She
should have been able to beat them back unless something happened.
3) Where was C-ko? The A-ko (Eiiko) and B-ko (Biiko) you used were pretty
distinctive, what did you do to them so that Eiiko could merrily run off
with Akane?
*whap* must fight hentai thoughts.... *thudthudthudthud*
Sorry. Anyway, I loved the scenes with Ranma and his mother. It'd be
interesting if Nodoka realizes that she was doing a *perfect* Akane
impersonation there at the end...
-- Magister
You really hate Genma don't you? Hurt him once for me, ne?