Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic][Hitomi] An Alternate History of Ranma 1/2, Chapter 7: What troubles me about...
From: "Jennifer Browning" <jenbrown1982@hotmail.com>
Date: 2/21/1998, 12:30 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

Are people sure that Hitomi wrote this?

Before anyone says anything, it does have the typical Hitomi elements.
long winded explanations, cliffhanger ending, loads of introspection by 
the characters, and stuff like that, but it also has stuff that makes me 
wonder.  like this.

	Ryouga looked at the small girl who seemed somehow familiar.  =93I=92m 
R=
youga
Hibiki, and I have business with Ranma, who I see is now hiding behind

Since when has Hitomi ever given the given name first and the family 
name last?  That is an unusual mistake.  and another thing, it missing 
something.  I cant put it into words, but the feel of the story is wrong 
somehow.  It's missing some element that goes into a clasic Hitomi 
story.

Also, if this is Hitomi, then shouldn't there be at least three or four 
other stories also written and sent out?

She can write fast, and usually puts out a lot of writing.

Jen

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