At 12:28 PM 2/17/98 -0500, JpdrAMP@aol.com wrote:

"Several motor pool staff received minor injuries, and Lieutenant 
Mukatsu, who was nearest to the explosion, received severe burns and a 
concussion.  He was rushed to sickbay.  The military police were summoned 
and the accused was placed under arrest."

Overall, this was quite good. I only had one problem.

Since the action was taking place on a base (not a ship) I don't think they'd
use the word "sickbay".

Damien Roc

	Actually, if it's on a naval or marine base, that's entirely possible.
They tend to refer to things by naval terms even when on dry land. ("I'll
be in the head." for bathroom, "Clear the deck." meaning get the floor
clean, et cetera..)

	A matter of centuries long tradition. <shrug> Go figure.

	Ed Becerra <whose late mother was a US Marine to the very end.>

"Dreamers may die, but the Dream is eternal.."