Subject: [FFML] Revival Pt5
From: Belphera
Date: 2/12/1998, 10:31 PM
To: "fanfic@fanfic.com" <fanfic@fanfic.com>, ffml@fanfic.com

here's part 5 it is really really really in the rough draft stage, but
I'll post it anyway.

Ranma 1/2

Revival Pt5

By Belphera

(The six girls sat around Akane, Ranma, and Lisann. Each were giving
them shocked looks. Ranma had just told them everything about his life.
Akane felt foolish herself, but these girls were very open and kind,
that she didn't mind telling them about her life. Somehow Ranma fidgeted
a lot, like he was worried about something. However, they told them
everything. Gemna's training trip, Nekoken, multiple fiancees, the
Amazons, Herb, Saffron, and finally Lisann. The information was very
hard to swallow, But the girls seemed to comfort the couple. However,
Ranma's grandfather was very interested in what Ranma was saying.)

Grandpa: Ranma, do you mean to tell me you can throw chi blasts?

Ranma: Yeah since I was sixteen. The old ghoul taught me.

Grandpa: The old ghoul?

 Ranma: cologne.

Grandpa: Wait! Cologne the Elder taught you?

Ranma: Yeah, Shampoo was her great-granddaughter. And since I defeated
her in battle, the old ghoul tried to get me to marry her.

Grandpa: (Still a bit shocked) Ranma, do you understand what Cologne
teaching you meant?

Ranma: no why?

Grandpa: When I was married to your grandmother, Cologne was revered as
one of the most powerful martial artists in the world. She never took on
students, never, her great-granddaughter was probably the only one. Her
chosen students, when she ever had any were the only ones who could ever
become immortals.

Ranma: immortals?

Grandpa: yes immortals, her first and last student was a man who ended
up destroying himself in a chi blast he created. It was a tragic
accident.

Ranma: Hmmmm�K. I guess I am just that great!!!

Akane: (hitting him on the head soundly) Grandpa, please don't add to
his already enormous ego.

Grandpa: Ranma I insist that you stay here for a day or two, I want to
observe you and the Jusenkyo curse.

Ranma: I don't know I pretty sure mom would want us to go home. Besides
I haven't lived with mom for a while.

Grandpa: Very well, Then I will go back with you. I'll go tell Nodoka
now.

Rei: Hey, you can't just leave me here alone.

Grandpa: I don't plan to leave you, you are coming with me. Some of the
temple hands will handle some of he duties for a week. It is very
important that you come with me, I will need more help with the fire
readings on Ranma.

Rei: I guess. (Looking at the other Senshi, who nod in return.) Okay
I'll go pack my stuff. (Getting up and leaving.)

Ranma: Fire readings? (Flashes of memories come back to him. Pictures of
a young Ranma crying into his mother's arms.)

Grandpa: Yes, now, how about a short sparring session, I really like to
see your skills in action.

Ranma: I don't know grandpa, I really don't feel like sparring. I don't
like sparring against relatives.

Akane: how about your father?

Ranma: He doesn't count, he's just a moron.

Grandpa: Well then how about some one else, like Serena, your boyfriend,
what's his name, Darien.

Serena: I'll see if he's free.

Grandpa: Good.

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(A few moments later, Ranma finds himself in the courtyard of the temple
facing off against a guy in his mid twenties. The young man is wearing a
simple gi, and Grandpa had given him the same.)

Ranma: (Thinking to himself) Why is it that everywhere I go, people
either want to kill me, or test my skills and then try to kill me?

Grandpa: Okay, just spar, no chi attacks, just simple sparring, hand to
hand, later we'll try weapons. Win by knock out.

Darien: (Walking up to Ranma and hold out a hand) Sure, grandpa, good
luck.

Ranma: (Talking the outstretched hand) Uh, sure, you too.

(Then the pair face off against each other. Bowing to each other, the
get into their positions. Ranma standing in a loose cat stance. And
Darien standing in a basic Shotokan karate stance. Then the attack
begins, Darien  rushes forward with a flying side kick at Ranma, who
doesn't move. Just about when the kick is going to reach him, he steps
to one side easily, allowing Darien to go flying past him. Quickly
recovering Darien lands and turns around expecting an attack, but Ranma
was just standing there in his modified cat stance. Darien is confused
for a moment but then attacks him in a flurry of punches and kicks.
Combination after combination, he tries to hit Ranma. But Ranma just
dodges and does not retaliate. After Darien had advanced to his highest
level of attacks, he began to tire. Ranma just could not be touched.
Trying one more combination he knew had to work, he kicked low, then
came around with a right hook, followed by an elbow, then a power kick,
and another flurry of punches, and finishing up with a spin kick. None
of it hit.)

Grandpa: Ranma, would you stop dodging, and attack back!! How will I
evaluate you if you don't do something?

Ranma: Al right already! (Then he turns back to Darien) Sorry.

(With that Ranma blurs and knocks the wind out of Darien following with
a knee to the forehead, then a sweep. Getting up after that attack,
Darien tried again, this time, Ranma blocked and grabbed his arm. Darien
tried to hit him with a round kick but Ranma caught that as well.
Slamming him into the ground, then finishing with a punch to the face,
Ranma neatly finished Darien off, This all happened in thirty seconds.
The others were astounded at the quickness that Ranma disposed of
Darien. Lita began to think to herself that Darien had beaten her
before, and Ranma defeated Darien so easily that it was like a master
sparring against a beginner.)

Grandpa: Amazing! Ranma, if he was a real opponent what would you really
have done?

Ranma: Well it depends, I'd have to have some one who is possibly close
to me like�K

A voice is heard: Ranma prepare to die!!!!

Ranma: Like Ryouga.

(Ryouga appears and seems to be extremely angry about something. His
aura is in full rage now.)

Ranma: Hiya, P-chan. What get lost again?

Ryouga: Shut up!!!! You aren't even ashamed of yourself after you raped
Akane.

Ranma: What? I did what?!

Ryouga: you heard me! You raped Akane at the tender age of twelve and
then caused her to become a mother. You bastard, do you have no dignity?

Ranma: hey, I did not rape Akane. Besides why would you care, P-chan?!

Ryouga: Stop calling me that!! You are a dog with no honor who raped
Akane to make a mongrel!!!!

Ranma: (Silently but deadly) A what?

Ryouga: A mongrel!  A stain!

Ranma: I thought so, well P-chan if you're so eager to fight then come
on. I'll turn you into pork chops!

(Rushing forward, Ryouga and Ranma fight furiously, each growing in
aura. The blows that contact are so hard that there are shock waves from
them. Ranma pounds Ryouga with Chestnut punches, and Ryouga takes them.
The battle is great and full of ferocity. Finally, Ranma knocks Ryouga
back and into the direction of Lisann. Looking up at Lisann, Ryouga then
becomes somewhat insane.)

Ryouga: you! The stain! You cause Akane the loss of her virginity! I
will remove you now!

(Powering up his body, he launches a devastating attack.)

Ryouga: Full Shi-Shi Houkandan!!!

Ranma: Nooooooo! (Run to protect Lisann, but Akane had already tried to
shield her with her own body. The other girls also shield her. Serena's
broach glows and creates a shield around them. Ryouga's attack reaches
them and pushes the shield back until the shield gives and they are all
hit with a lessened Shi-Shi Houkandan. The blast knocked them all down
and injured Lisann and Akane very much. Rushing over to Lisann and
Akane, he checked them, Akane was fine, just a few scratches and her
clothes a bit steaming. Lisann was hurt a bit worse, she suffered a
dislocated shoulder and a few scratches. Popping her shoulder back in
and stabilizing it, Ranma was glad it hadn't been worse. Then he turned
back to Ryouga.)

Ranma: (Extremely pissed) You hurt them! You HURT THEM BOTH!!!

Grandpa: (getting up like the others) Ranma don't!

Ryouga: Come on you honor-less bastard!

Ranma: AAAHHHHHH!!!!!! Dragon Fire!!!!! (The blast was enormous, and
unblockable. Ryouga stared as it came closer and struck him down. But
Ryouga was trying to get up.) not enough?!!! Rising Dragon Annihilation
revised: Dragon fire!!!!! (The attack lifted Ryouga up and slammed into
him, not throwing him away, but burning him until Ranma stopped it. And
walked up to Ryouga.)

Ryouga: Well? What are you waiting for? Kill me!!!!

Ranma: (Calmed down a bit) No, I won't I'm telling you to leave Akane,
me, and Lisann alone. If you ever come near us without friendly
intentions, I swear I will kill you, now get out of my sight. (Using
another Rising Dragon Defeat, he sends Ryouga away.)

Grandpa: Ranma, I think I have seen that you are quite powerful.
Perhaps. Perhaps you are the one.
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(That night they were back at the Saotome home, trying to explain
everything to Grandpa. Akane took Rei on a tour of the house, and
conversed with her on miscellaneous topics. Feeling the need to leave
such madness, Rei took a joy in walking in the garden. Her aunt had such
a talent with these things. When she was young, her aunt taught her
things of how a woman should act and so forth. Aunt Nodoka was always
like a mother to her, and she felt good whenever she visited. However
one day she stopped coming too often. At first she thought it had been
because of her, but once when she came back from a mission with the
others and she found Aunt Nodoka crying on Grandpa. That night she
learned she learned that for the past ten years she had been waiting for
Ranma and Uncle Gemna to come home, but they still hadn't come home yet.
  Soon after Rei began to spend more time with her aunt and to comfort
her. Throughout that time, Rei had discovered how graceful her aunt
could be. To her, Aunt Nodoka was the epitome of a woman. And now
walking through her garden, which she had created just reminded her of
that fact.)

Rei: So how long have you known Aunt Nodoka?

Akane: (Looking at some flowers) Only about a year or two.

Rei: Oh�KSo I guess life has been rough for you and Cousin Ranma?

Akane: That would be putting it mildly. I don't know how we got through
it all. Kidnappings after kidnappings, and then fiancees after fiancees.
There were times when I thought I hated him, but then he would go and do
something noble, and I'd be unsure of what I was feeling.

Rei: Wow, You must really love him. There's only one couple who I know
who is as close together as you and Ranma are, Serena and Darien.

Akane: Darien�Kisn't he the one that Ranma sparred with?

Rei: Well yeah, if you can even call that sparring. (Looking off into
the stars) Yeah, I guess you can say those two were fated to love each
other.

Akane: So how about you?

Rei: huh?

Akane: Are you with anyone right now?

Rei: (Looking down into the water under the stone bridge) No, I used to
be in love with some one but I lost interest in him very soon after he
started going out with a friend of mine.

Akane: Sorry, I didn't mean to pry.

Rei: that's okay. Besides that means I'm a free girl. (Looking back at
the house) I wish I had a family like that?

Akane: you do, we are your family.

Rei: no, I wish I had a father and a mother like that, especially a
mother like Aunt Nodoka.

Akane: Oh, I understand what you mean. I lost my mother when I was
young.

Rei: Yeah, I still don't know what happened to my mother and father.
Grandpa just refuses to talk about them.

Akane: I'm so sorry. But you don't have to worry anymore, we're your
family now.  We'll be here if you ever need us.

Voice: Mommy! Auntie Rei!

(The two women turn around to see Lisann bounded for them. Mioki is in
tow and trying to keep up with Lisann.)

Akane: What is it honey?

Lisann: (Runs into Akane's arms.) Grandpa wants to tell you two
something.

Mioki: (finally caught up to Lisann.) Grandfather wants to speak to you
two.

(Nodding, Rei and Akane both go back to the house. Inside, Ranma is
sitting to one side as Nodoka is talking with Grandpa. Taking a seat on
each side of Ranma, Rei and Akane sit.)

Grandpa: (noticing the new arrivals.) Ah, Rei, your aunt and I have
decided something.

Rei: (Eyes narrowing a bit.) And that would be?

Nodoka: I have agreed that you can stay here until you graduate high
school.

Rei: (eyes widening a bit.) What?! Why?

Grandpa: I need you to stay here with Ranma and monitor his skills and
any activity that goes around him. Besides I thought you might like to
stay with your aunt for a while. The temple has enough hands around for
you to stay here.

Rei: (Faltering.) I wouldn't mind staying with Aunt Nodoka, but my
friends.

Nodoka: you'll see them at school everyday right?

Rei: (Sighing.) I guess. (Brightening.) Well Auntie, I guess that means
we get to spend more time together.

Nodoka: (Also brightening) yes, now you will have to share a room with
your cousin Mioki. Akane you will sleep with Ranma, and Lisann will have
a room to herself.

Lisann: I have my own room?

Nodoka: That's right, now why don't you go and move your stuff so that
your aunt Rei can move her things in.

Lisann: Okay. But are mommy and daddy going to tuck me in also?

Nodoka: of course dear. Now how about if Grandma helped you move your
things into your new big girl room? (Offering a hand to Lisann.)

Lisann: Okay. Grandma have you seen Mr. Bear? (her voice trails off as
she leads Nodoka away.)

Grandpa: (To Rei) your cousin is a very unique person and I want to know
what goes on with him. Also I want you to improve on your martial arts
skill. Young Ranma has already surpassed me in that field. Learn how chi
is generated.

Rei: Yes Grandpa.

Grandpa: (To Ranma) Ranma, If you are who I think you are, things will
be changing soon. Now I must go, Gemna!

(Gemna comes out of the kitchen with a look of fear on his face.)

Gemna: Yes Elder?

Grandpa: Home, now, you're going to be staying with me for a couple of
days, I'm going to teach you not to leave my daughter alone for twelve
years. (Their voices fade as Gemna is force to drive Grandpa home.)

(The four teens sit quietly for a while until Ranma gets up.)

Ranma: hey you guys, Let's do something. I'm getting bored.

Akane: Ranma, don't you have homework?

Ranma: Ah, I don't know.

Akane: Of course you did, you just slept through class, and you don't
know about it.

Ranma: Well, I don't see the point in it, I'm a martial artist, I don't
need all those things about numbers and literature stuff.

Akane: Fine! Well I'm going to do it and not end up like a certain idiot
I know.

Ranma: Oh yeah well�K(The two go back and forth arguing until Akane
finally hammers him. She gets up and goes to her room, moves her stuff
and starts doing her homework. Rei and Mioki decided to do the same,
leaving a crushed Ranma on the floor.)

Ranma: (mumbling into the ground.) I hate my life.

______________________________________________________________________________________

(Later that week, Ranma is sitting in the furo and thinking about what
has happened in the past week. He was now officially married to Akane,
he has a daughter, and a sister. Today he found his grandfather and
cousin. Things were moving way too fast for him. What else could
happen?)

Happousei: (Bounding into the room through a window) Ranma!

Ranma: (angrily) Damnit jiji! What are you doing here?

Happousei: Ranma, I just wanted to tell you what was going on with the
raid on the orphanage. So far, I've got Kuno and Ukyou. I haven't been
able to find Ryouga.

Ranma: Don't worry, I'll look for him, I just saw him today.

Happousei: Why didn't you keep him here?

Ranma: Let's just say we got into a disagreement.

Happousei: (slapping forehead) you got into a fight, and he got lost
again.

Ranma: Yep.

Happousei: (Taking a map out of his robes.) here is a map of the
orphanage, I'll be back in two days to talk about our plan.

Ranma: Good, now get out of here so I can have a decent bath!

Happousei: Going, going. (sly grin) Say are you going to wash yourself
as a female?

Ranma: Out!

(Bounding away, Happousei chuckles into the night. Sighing in tiredness
Ranma sinks beneath the surface and sits at the bottom of the furo.
However, at that moment Akane walks in and is tired of the homework she
just finished. Sitting on the stool, she washes herself, missing Ranma
coming to the surface, and taking a breath before going back down.
Finishing washing herself, Akane sinks into the furo and lays her head
back to relax. However, Ranma chooses that exact time to rise from the
water.)

Akane: (Sighing) Ahhhhh�K..

Ranma: (rising) �K�K

(At that moment the two look at each other. A few moments pass before�K)

Akane: Ranma No hentai!

Ranma: Akane, It was an accident, besides you walked in on me!

Akane: It doesn't matter, you were staring at my body!

Ranma: you're my wife, aren't I supposed to do that?

Akane: �K�K.

Ranma: I mean since we are legally married, you shouldn't have a problem
with this right?

Akane: (defeated.) I guess so. (Sitting back down.)

Ranma: Whew. (Getting up to leave.)

Akane: Ranma? Do you really think about us like that now?

Ranma: Like what? (tying a towel around him.)

Akane: As married.

Ranma: (Stops.) Uh�K

Akane: Ranma, come back in.

Ranma: (Brain slows functioning.) Are you sure?

Akane: Yes.

(Getting back into the furo, he watches Akane cautiously.)

Akane: Don��t worry, I won't do anything.

Ranma: Okay.

Akane: Well? Do you think of us that way?

Ranma: Um�K(Thinking) Should I tell her the truth. Do I really love her?
Of course I do.

Akane: Well?

Ranma: (Taking a deep breath.) Yes.

Akane: (eyes watering a bit.) Really?

Ranma: Yeah.

Akane: Oh Ranma! (moves forward and hugs him.)

Ranma: (a bit surprised and distracted by her body.) uh�K(Enjoying the
hug, he hugs her back.)

Akane: Ranma, you don't know how long I've waited to hear that you feel
this was about me. (Pulling out of the hug, she looks at him seriously
before kissing him deeply. After a moment, Ranma gets into the kiss
himself. By the time they both pull away they were breathless. Akane
then rests in his arms.)

Ranma: Akane?

Akane: yes? (Hope in her voice.)

Ranma: (Looking her deep in the eyes.) I love you.

Akane: (Eyes shimmering.) oh Ranma I love you too. (Kissing him again,
she kisses him with all her love. Soon, the kisses become more
passionate. Suddenly her hands roam over his body�K)

* Lemon part *


End of Part 5

Author's notes:

Well that's it for now, but I need someone to write the lemon part of
this cause I can't write one.

-Belphera