Seems rather strange of Ranma to pick the code name "Bo". He's better barehanded.

Her hair was let loose in a stream of dark black, that was 
similarly colored like the circular mark on her forehead and cheeks.

Skuld's marks are blue.

Next, the deal with Lillith.

This is the same continuity as the Tenko/EVA fic right? you already have a Lillith there remember?
Still hoping we can see what happened to the NERV crew after your last fic.