All right...time to get of lurking mode, which I've been
in for a few months now...

If you really want help, well, I'll give it to you.
Ditch your Sailor Moon idea.  It's been done many times.
And not too effectively at that.  My advice is that you
do a Ranma 1/2 fanfic.

You could try doing a story in first person perspective...
from Shampoo's perspective.

Vincent "Sklathill" Diamante