Heres a little idea I've been thinking about for a couple days now.  Now 
it isn't anime based, but I use the anime prospects when writting it.  
This isn't even the first part.  It is just a taste.  What do you think. 
C+C welcome.  Should I go with or slay it.
					Trom

Michelle ran through the alley, someone was following her.  Although she 
has yet to see him, she knew he was there.  No matter how fast she ran 
or how far, he still stayed behind her.  Why was she running?  She 
didn't know if he wanted to hurt her or not, it was just an instinct to 
run when confronted with the unknown.
	[Thump, Thump] The footsteps of her pursuer echoed over the 
alleyway walls.  Her heart was clenched in fear.   She gave out a cry of 
despair as the alley came to a close.  She turned her back to the wall 
and waited for the person to make himself known.  Thoughts flowed threw 
her mind.  
	*What does he look like?  Is he a drug addict? Someone so high 
on drugs that pain is just another form of pleasure to him.  What if he 
wanted more than just money or jewelry.* Michelle suddenly remembered 
the watch that her grandfather had given to her.  It was in her pocket, 
for she wanted to get it appraised.  Why oh why did she come here of all 
places?  She had never came here before.  Why now?
	[THUMP! THUMP!] The steps were coming closer.  She crouched down 
into a ball.  Maybe if he was out of it, he wouldn't see her hiding in 
the corner were the walls meet.  She knew this was wishful thinking.  
Sweat started forming on her brow.  Why oh Why is this happening to her? 
 What did she ever do to deserve this?
	[THUMP! THUMP!] A figure appeared in entrance.  Tall, over six 
feet tall.  With shoulders that barely made it possible to enter the 
close walls of the alley.  It was impossible to see his face for the 
trench coat that he wore, as the lapels were up.  All she could see were 
cold hard eyes that gleamed with humor.  He slowed his pace upon seeing 
her.  He would drag this out to get the utmost fear out of her.
	Michelle then started scream, like she never screamed before.  
As if her life depended on it, and it did.  The alley seemed to darken 
as he got closer, until all that but him was cloaked in darkness.   
Still Michelle screamed.  She didn't seem to even need to take a breath, 
she only continued to scream.
	Just as he got to her, he reached for the clasp holding his 
tench coat together.  She knew what he was going to do.  He was going to 
expose himself to her and take what she valued the most.  She couldn't 
even scream anymore, the terror had her throat locked shut.  Time seemed 
to slow down for her.  His hands closing on his coat, slowly drawing it 
open to reveal-
	A boy on stilts holding an alarm clock?!
	"Hahahaha! Time to wake up Michelle." With that the alarmclock 
went off.

	"Ahhhh!" Michelle woke up in her bed screaming.  She quickly 
threw off the covers and rushed to the bathroom, knocking her father out 
of the way.  The door slammed shut as she tried to get her underwear off 
before she lost control of her bowels.

	"Hahahaha! Point to me!" Jack jumped out of bed as he got ready 
for school.  It was going to be a good day.  Man did he love being a 
DreamWalker.