Subject: RE: [FFML] [Ranma][TIL/TBE] Goddess of My Harmful Deeds
From: "Alekzander" <alek@lvd.com.ar>
Date: 12/20/1997, 4:02 PM
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CC: <fanfic@fanfic.com>

"Intermittent Explosive Disorder.  Also known as rage 
disorder.  It is often indicated by several discrete 
episodes of failure to resist aggressive impulses that 
result in serious acts of assault or destruction of 
property.  The degree of aggressiveness expressed during 
the episodes is grossly out of proportion to any of the 
precipitating psycho-social stressors."

Ranma blinked at the clinical tone in Akane's voice.  "Is 
that what you have?"

At first I thought Tofu said that technical part.  I had to stop, back up,
and reread it to figure out that it was Akane was repeating something
she'd
heard in the hospital.  Unless I'm the only one who had this little bit of
difficulty, perhaps you should put in a bit more of an explicit cue that
this is Akane talking.

I had the same problem too.

Alekzander.
Net address: alek@lvd.com.ar
HomePage: http://members.tripod.com/~Alekzander/