Subject: Re: [Fwd: Re: [FFML] [FANFIC][SM][DARK] Mama's Hand #4]
From: Douglas Helm
Date: 12/17/1997, 1:57 PM
To: "Jiro \"Nemesis\" Maeda" <dx4boy@evoserve.com>
CC: fanfic@fanfic.com

                               Rated : R
Jiro: Dang! sorry Key you'll have to be replaced, you're only 17
Key: Key understands
(Key gets up and leaves, a girl in armour takes her place)
Nene: Hi guys! did I miss anything!!!

(Grk!) At least it wasn't Priss.

Part IV - A new friend
Nene:Senshis?
Jiro: Hope it's not Endimyon
Sho and Nene: Why not?
(Jiro hands Sho and Nene the previous parts of Mama's Hands, Sho screams 
and the Guyver unit engulfs him, Nene begins to smash things)
Jiro: Guys, it's Starting (gives the others "the look", they nod 
sheepishly and take their seats)

(Hmmm...) This could get interesting. A race to see who get's to *the*
Endymion first.

"Oh Mom!" Usagi gave a small cry and wrapped her arms around her mother,
"What type of monster does THAT?"
Sho: The monster that deserves this! (Fires a Mega-smasher)
Jiro nods with enthusiasm as he sharpens Tenshi-Maru on a Runed Millstone

^_^ Well Lurker and Flashman get the first crack at Endymion with a sword.
There might be something left over for you to have.

"Usagi, talk seriously? Is this about Mamoru?!?" Luna asked softly.
Jiro:BAKA Neko!!!! This is serious stuff
Sho:Come to think of it Usagi does appear to be serious only when talking 
about Mamoru
Nene:Isn't Mamoru Endymion?

It would appear that Usagi only talks Seriously about Mamoru, won't that be
a shock when she finds out what he's been upto.

All: (finally getting it) oh so she's...

Yep.


(snippage)
would come down here. It was unlikely that Endymion would order them down 
here to tend to her. <Pluto?> She tried to see but her vision was a mass 
of dark blurs within darker blurs. 
Jiro/Nemesis:He blinded her!!!arrgh (Thinks of a billion ways to make 
Endymion suffer berfore cutting his *BEEP* and then ending his *CENSORED* 
life)
Sho/Guyver:She's his wife for christsake!
Nene:And to think I found him cute in that Tuxedo (begins to hurl)
Jiro/Nemesis:Feel better?
Nene:No, not until that sicko pays!

No he didn't blind her. I can't explain why she can't see properly though
because it's plot material.

Jiro: Doug-san,are you implying that Usagi-sama is a masochist?

I'm implying that she Usagi-sama might have wanted to experiment a little
and things got out of hand. I'm trying to be tasteful about the matter.

"Pluto, I ask you to do this for the Royal House of the Moon as one of
its Senshi. Fulfill this new oath. Help my daughter." The only sounds
were of Pluto's soft breathing and Serenity's weasing breaths, <Please,
Pluto, allow me to have some peace. For when I am gone, I will not
receive any for my own crimes.>

All:crimes?

As Serenity said, hind sight is 20/20. Although she was a victim she was
told on more then one occasion, and was even aware of it at later stages,
that she and eventually Small Lady were being abused. Serenity failed to do
anything until it became a life and death struggle for Small Lady. In her
mind she's committed one of the worst crimes imaginable to a mother,
failing to protect her child. I'm not blaming everything on Serenity,
Endymion's the real monster; I'm just trying to point out taht she's not
guiltless.

Sho:What kind of freak would stop a child from meeting her mother's 
friends?
Nene:The demonic monster we know and hate.
(Jiro merely nods)

Luna might not be around in the future. If Endymion's taken steps to get
rid of the Senshi what's stopping him from doing the same to Luna and Artemis?

Nene: Usagi-chan, she ain't a Hibiki.
Sho:What makes you so sure, remember the jerk did saythat Chibi's not 
his. 
Nene:Shut up! (bonks Sho and punts him again to LEO)

Some kids forget, she's only been there a day and unlikely out of Usagi's
presents very often.

"Hai, a pair that was a too small for me. The sweater shrunk and I
thought she'd look kawaii in it," Usagi said, "The medicine's working
too because the welts aren't as red. I think they're still sore but they
aren't as red as they were."
Jiro:I'd like to give Endymion some welts of his own, Let's see if he 
likes it! (Holds up a laser whip)

Oh! Another one to add to the list, sheesh... that's (counts) about 50 so
far and it's only #4.


Jiro:Let's see first I'll skin him alive, put vinigar on his 
wounds,insert diluted AIDS infected blood in his bloodstream then..
Sho:Whoh, Don't get too caried away 

^_^; Yep definite race. Maybe Pluto can arrage it so that all punishments
take effect instantly, all at one.

Jiro: Very nice, you did well on toning down the violence.
Sho:Everyone was in character except Chibi but under the sircumstances 
that can be looked over
Nene:Stray thought, I wonder how the kid will react once he meets Mamoru 
Chiba?
Jiro:Guess we'll have to tune in next time, meanwhile let's have a little 
fun! (Pulls out an Endymion, Guyver and the Knight Saber smile as they 
begin to practice on him, as the night drones screams can be heard 
eminating from the Shadowy peak)

Thanks for MSTing the story. Much appreciated. I hand to tone down the
violance for this part mainly because it was going to be a reliefe part.
Things will get ugly again near the end but... Oh well. For the record
someone managed to guess a fairly close approximation of the ending after
part three. I won't give out that person's name and I've asked them to stay
quite so that the ending doesn't get spoiled.




Doug

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