Subject: Re: [FFML] [eva] [fanfic] Age of Evangelion 1 - Gathering
From: Chan Wei Lik
Date: 12/2/1997, 7:30 AM
To: "'FFML'" <fanfic@fanfic.com>
Reply-to:
"weimin@pl.jaring.my"

 He suddenly frowned as he reached the section that described the
developing clones.  "Destroy them and start a new set."

I assume what ever it was didn't take well to being female?

"Use mine, there are several samples on file."

Any particular reason why this would work when the other sample (I assume from whatever was left of Yui after she was absorbed) didn't?

"Shinji.  Shinji Ayanami."  *He might have been our son, Yui.*

Doesn't sound right somehow, but what the heck. Had he been planning to name the female clones Yui Ayanami?

A young girl with long dark brown hair and wearing a blue high-school uniform

Rei as a normal girl, cute!

"Commander, we can't.  Shinji is in no condition-"

Just curious, when did he get hurt?

"No," Rei said miserably.  "All they every told me was they he was doing
something that was very important, and that he wanted to see me."

Did she run away? Or was she sent away?

She was going to see her father after three years, and she was looking forward to it.

Doesn't sound like someone who ran away.

"She doesn't have to do anything, only sit in it and follow our instructions," Ritsuko returned calmly.

You make it sound SOOO simmple.

Moments later, a giant purple robot, a hideous parody of a man, shot into view.

That's one, where's the other?

Good, good.
After reading this, I had a nasty idea.
How about Gendo as the unlucky test pilot who got absorbed and Yui as the head of NERV instead?