Subject: Re: [FFML] [WOT/RANMA] Parallel Lives, Chapter 3
From: "Tempest-" <Omicron@sprynet.com>
Date: 11/16/1997, 6:56 PM
To: "Ranma Al'Thor" <ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu>, <fanfic@fanfic.com>

	There's some formatting problems here.  I tried to read it but I just
can't stand looking at another � or �.  Perhaps you could find a way to
fix this.

Below are a few examples taken from various places in the text:

actually find Akane�s trail.  All they knew was that Akane had 
      Ukyou looked up from his cooking.  �What�s wrong, Ranchan?�
      �Nothing,�  Ranma-chan said automatically.  Instincts acquired 
anyway.  I got us into this, she thought.  I�ll get us out.  Living in

matters worse.  She still wasn�t quite sure how or why she had 
abominably, but Ranma�s heart had gone out to the poor girl and she 
had done her best to try to protect her.  It hadn�t surprised Ranma-
chan very much when Alyssa �washed out�, but that was because 

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     The Moon Hill Gymnasium was crowded with students, most from
Moon 
Hill, but some from other schools.  The special committee to pick the

theme for the first spring dance had argued for weeks over a theme. 
Many 
ideas had been suggested:  Love--American Style, Spring Sock Hop,
Can't 
Stop Doing the Monkey, The Black Plague, Enchantment under the Sea,
Zinc 
Oxide and You, Space Viking Vixen Women from Venus, The Progressive
Era, 
and The First Spring Dance.  After extensive argument, the sole
remaining 
conscious committee member had selected the theme "Our Gym Covered in

Crepe Paper."  
--Sailor Moon Z #7
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	Hah! I remember that. Shortly after it could be called "Our Gym Burned
to Ashes."

Adam Chris Leigh
Omicron@sprynet.com
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