Okay, a few things about the chapter I recently sent out.
1. I've gotten negative feedback on the excessive brutality to giant worms.
Please take note that in the future, such comments will be printed out,
using low-grade, cheap John Wayne toilet paper, and flushed.
2. Comments on the language in this chapter...we've been over this one
before. VIZ cuts down on the intensity of the language used by the Ranma
cast. The dialogue in this chapter would be normal for such a situation,
trust me.
3. I may have mislocated this chapter in the story. You may see *another*
chapter 20 of Onna: Red Side before the end of next week. If this happens,
then that will be the true chapter 20, and this part will be chapter 21. I
realized that perhaps it would be better to put out one more dramatic
chapter before moving on to the comedy relief.
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-Lurkadis Lavenwers-
EternalLostLurker@worldnet.att.net
Kaze wa tsubasa ni noru, tsubasa wa kaze ni noru
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