Subject: Comment Patrol
From: "Henry J. Cobb" <hcobb@slip.net>
Date: 9/28/1997, 1:18 PM
To: fanfic@fanfic.com

We don't need taskmasters for writers, surely the story traffic on the

list is more than sufficent for anybody. (In bulk)



The traffic that is needed is Comment and Critique, but I'm not going to

just whine about it.



Here's my deal, if you submit a serious, non-spamfic, non-lemon story that

is a pure play on Urusei Yatsura, Project A-ko or El Hazard (no crossovers

outside) and you get no comment on it and then you complain to me (not the

list), I'll write a detailed critique on it.  Deal?



In time I can see an entire Comment Patrol forming with a website listed

in the FAQ where writers could turn to to find the proper critiquers to

harass.



Now, we'd need to find a real nutcase to handle the Ranma traffic.

(Perhaps somebody who's a big enough fan of the series to put Ranma not

only into his handle, but also into his DNS domain? ;-)



	Henry J. Cobb	hcobb@slip.net          http://www.io.com/~hcobb