Alright, I tried sending this out earlier today, but I don't  think it
worked.  If it did, sorry.  If not, here goes:

I thought "The Wedding" was very good. Why:

Grammar/Spelling: There were no errors which made the fic difficult to
read, so this was good.  I don't like nit picking.

Diction/Syntax: excellent.  There was enough variety to keep this from
assuming the droning pace which so many fics take.

Plot: Not much development in this first part, but that's to be expected.
I've always liked the character-driven plots when compared to the combat
driven plots.  They just have so much more potential.  You seem to be
handling it well.

Characters: Ranma is different than what he was at the end of the manga.
Normally, he would not listen to any constructive advice, instead doing
the exact opposite.  I agree with the fact that he does love Ranma after
the manga, and I like the arguments you presented through his narration.
Unfortunately, you failed to explain why his personality has changed.  If
you put that in somewhere, this fic will be great.

One reader awaiting ch2
							-M