I liked this a lot.  Reasons will be elaborated upon in the comments. 
Comments(!)
Spelling/grammar/etc: I didn't notice any glaring errors, but I didn't
nitpick.  There were no errors which interfered in the reading, so this
section is good.

Syntax/diction: There was a refreshing ammount of variety in your word
choices and sentence structure.  Weak syntax and diction have absolutely
kill any interest I may have had in stories with otherwise good plots.
Thankfully, yours avoids this category.

Plot: There hasn't been enough of the plot revealed as of yet to base any
helpful comments upon.  I do, however, like the slower, more character-
and less combat-driven plots.  "The Wedding" seems to be shaping up to be
one of these.

Characters: There hasn't been enough to reveal any signifigant character
development, so I won't comment on this.  However, I firmly believe that
if there is a dramatic change from the end of the manga, the author's
logic should be explained.  Ranma is normally stubborn beyond all human
comprehension.  He would ordinarily do the exact opposite of what anyone
tells him to do just to spite them.  You have presented a different Ranma
Saotome to your readers.  Please explain what went through his head that
caused him to change his opinions toward life in general.  You did explain
why he wants to marry Akane, but you never told the reader why his
personality has changed.  

You have a reader here patiently awaiting the next installment
								-M