Hello everyone!
I'm back from my summer job (although "summer vacation" would be more
accurate). I spent the entire summer cruising around the Eastern provinces
of Canada as a tour guide for the Bluenose II 1997 Canada Tour.
Unfortunately, I was unable to keep working on LoD, since I couldn't
access a computer. But fear not! I have not abandoned LoD!
Right now, I'm doing a somewhat major revision of the first seven
chapters to work out some of the bugs. This is what I've modified (so far):
Verika and Kanma's past (a little)
ki/chi spelling
Hehshin stick/rod
The battle at the train station
The battle between Ranko and Happosai at Juuban
I eradicated Chibi-Usa!!!
I fixed the family name problems
Transformation phrases corrected according to new timeline
Small words here and there
General formatting
As soon as my pre-readers stop finding bugs in it, I'll send it to the
list and put the updated version on my WWW page. I've started work on
chapter 8 and it's around 40 Kb right now and growing (yes, it'll be
another big one!) I have no idea when I'm going to finish it, though. If
you wonder why I'm taking so long, please keep in mind that I speak French,
not English, as a primary language. I'm a bit slower when I write in a
second language. There's also the fact that I've just started university
and I have yet another part-time job, so I have less time than usual to
write on my computer.
(Small warning to budding authors: the biggest mistake you can make is
to put Chris Rijk and Terence Fergusson in your pre-reader's list. Those
guys are heartless!... But I like'em anyway, cause they do good work!)
If you choose to reply, please note that I'm *not* on the FFML right
now. If you reply to the list, I will *not* see your messages.
Thank you and have a nice day! ;)
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* The Phoenix Reborn * Jordanite and Mystical
********************** Freak at Large
Louis-Philippe Giroux
Phoenix@upc.qc.ca
Phoenix's Den at http://www.upc.qc.ca/~phoenix/phoenix.html
Or http://pages.upc.qc.ca/phoenix/phoenix.html