I didn't quite understand why Akane just stood there while Kuno was
pummeling Ryoga. I kept expecting her to intervene. (I know she never
did this when it was Ranma vs. Kuno, but Ranma never looked like he was
about to get beat.) Maybe you can explain what she was thinking a little
more.

Other than that, it was quite good. I could really understand and
emphasize with what Ryoga was going through.


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